Deep Line Edit + Video Review

Send me up to 50 pages (double spaced, times new roman, 12 pt) from your manuscript, and I’ll take a deep look at how your writing is working on the page.

You’ll receive:

A detailed line review of up to 50 pages (double spaced, times new roman, 12 pt)

I’ll work directly in your manuscript, leaving comments, edits, questions, and suggestions as I read.

A personalized video review

I’ll record myself walking through your pages and talking you through what I’m seeing as an editor—what’s working, where I’m getting pulled out of the story, what I would strengthen, and why.

You’ll receive a private link to the recording so you can watch it on your own time and return to it while you revise.

Patterns you can apply beyond these pages

Rather than treating every edit as an isolated correction, I’ll point out recurring patterns in your writing and explain the craft behind my suggestions so you can apply what you learn to the rest of your manuscript.

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have several chapters or a first draft written but know it could be stronger and you want an experienced author and book coach to show you what’s working, what’s getting in the way, and why.

It’s especially useful if you:

- Have revised your chapter so many times that you can’t see it clearly anymore.

- Want to strengthen dialogue, emotion, interiority, pacing, clarity, description, or sentence-level flow.

- Keep receiving feedback but aren’t always sure how to translate it into actual changes on the page.

- Want more than corrections: you want to understand the craft behind the edits.

- Notice the same writing issues coming up repeatedly and want help identifying your patterns.

- Want feedback you can apply not only to this chapter, but to the rest of your novel.

You’ll receive a detailed line edit of your chapter up to 50 pages (double spaced, times new roman, 12 pt), plus a personalized video review where I walk you through what I’m seeing and explain the reasoning behind key edits.

The goal isn’t simply to give you a stronger chapter. It’s to help you become better at seeing—and revising—your own writing.

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1. What do I submit?
Submit a continuous excerpt of up to 50 pages (double spaced, times new roman, 12 pt) from your novel or memoir. For the most useful feedback, choose pages you’ve already drafted and revised but know could still be stronger.
2. What will you look at during the line edit?
I’ll look at how your writing is working on the page and for the reader, including dialogue, emotion, interiority, pacing, clarity, specificity, description, repetition, character reactions, and sentence-level flow. You’ll receive my edits and comments directly in your manuscript, plus a personalized video review explaining what I’m seeing and why.
3. Is this the right service if I need help with my plot or story structure?
Probably not. This review focuses on how the writing is working on the page. If you’re still figuring out your plot, character arc, story structure, or what should happen in the chapter, a book coaching session is likely a better fit.

You can book a 1-on-1 Consultation here: https://writingconversations.thrivecart.com/consultation/

If you know what the scene needs to accomplish and want help making the actual writing stronger, the Video Line Edit is designed for that.

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